(reads through a few I’d already seen to try to find my place and remember what was going on) I just realized... you have nice panels... I don’t really notice them too often and that’s nice. I started trying to make a little Bleach fan comic (not sure if you knew that already) and it’s so hard trying to think of how to make panels. T_T Angles and when to repeat panels to show motion and all that... Yours are very smooth, where it’s more like watching an anime than looking at a page. (am I exaggerating? Several times in the past, I’ve tried resuming a book by going to the TV, so it might have more to do with the story than the panels...)
Civilian Files 3: The news girl is cute. And I thought she looked like a horse. And the duck is neat. Especially cute in the last panel.
4: Hmm... I can’t help think the equitaurs could have problems with space and trying to get their legs to do what they want them to. But, I’m sure it’d be much different if I became an equitaur versus someone being born one. ...I wonder how they rest.
Can horses sit?
Out of the Darkness Ch3 Title Page: not that it’s not a nice picture, but your recurring dreams is really interesting. It’d be neat if that happened to me... And what if you have the dreams for a reason, like he’s really out there?
Hmm... actually, now it’s starting to sound like a comic called Dreamless about a girl and boy who saw each other every night since they were born. But, it sounds like your dreams are more mysterious.
page 2: I think he reminds me of Green in the last panel. He suddenly looks so cute and innocent with his big sparkly eyes. ^_^”
page 4: I wonder why he didn’t just let the blond go, if he doesn’t really want to kill anyone... I think I like the first few panels a lot. His kind’a disbelieving expression in the first, and the calm emotion in the second, well, and him zooming around that fast, makes him seem pretty much unstoppable. Even though I know where he came from (...basically...), I’m going, “what in the world is he?!
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page 5: ... Well, that’s a little odd. He’s all terminator-mode, and then he’s like, “hey, you know where there’s a library around here?” (although, if I remember right, I think there was something weird like that in one of the Terminator movies)
page 6: (spends a few seconds wondering what actually happened to that thing he ‘ate’)
Page 8: Hmm... I wonder if that’s actually that one guy in disguise... In that case, I think Lukas may have a greater chance of losing his head if he asks than if he doesn’t... Oh, and I wonder about that game board in the last panel. Actually, I started wondering when I saw the deck of cards on the last page, because I don’t know many card games.
page 9: I’d probably turn into something like that if I was a shape shifter, just because I wouldn’t have enough time or imagination to plan out a good thing to turn into... “teeth! I need big teeth to look scary!” I wonder how functional his shapes are. I mean, if he has the same amount of strength no matter what he looks like, or if he also gains any abilities the shapes would have. I guess I wonder about that because it looks like he keeps whatever powers he usually has when he changes shape, so I wonder how it works the other way.
page 11: He has such pretty golden eyes. ^_^ Hmm... and I wonder if either Spike or Cepheus could be the anomaly. Especially since he’s going into that building.
page 12: Hmm...
page 16: The last panel catches my eye. I think it looks as though Spike could do something. Or at least... I’ve seen shows and stuff where a character’s helpless, but wants to do something, so then they gain some type of super power and kicks their butt. ...there’s also a lot of times I want that to happen and it doesn’t.
page 17: Apparently, Spike seems to think that way, too (or not at all).
page 19: I wasn’t expecting that. And Cepheus looks surprised, as well.
page 20: So he doesn’t like touching people because it makes a mind link thingy? The third (or is it fourth...) panel, it looks like he’s had enough of hearing Spikes’ thoughts.
page 21: Eh? Does she mean the fire-breathing monsters Cepheus thought of, or herself...?
page 22: I hope Cepheus can help her through things. ^_^ Mostly so I can see learn something about it. ^_^”
Hmm... Still lotsa pages left. ^_^ I think I like reading a lot at a time... comics flow better that way...